Pick a Blurb

Looking for a little input. I'm tackling the back cover blurb for my new space opera Spectors. Which one do you like better?

1)
Space pirate Kristy Ryan is having a bad day.

First, her pilot and lover, Andrew Bennet, picks a fight with her.

Second, the Military Space Alliance comes across her ship when she’s running a not-so-legal job.

Third, she finds out her father, a notorious space pirate himself, disappeared while working for the MSA.

Fourth, and the final straw, the MSA is blackmailing her to continue the dangerous mission her father started.

What else could go wrong? 

2)
Space pirate Captain Kristy Ryan grew up the only daughter of a notorious privateer in the Border Planet Region. Having learned her trade the hard way, she prefers life in the shadows on her ship, the Unicorn. Even when her pilot and lover, Andrew Bennet, drives her crazy.

But an unexpected visit from the Military Space Alliance changes everything. Her father disappeared while working a dangerous mission for the MSA. Now, she’s being blackmailed into finishing his mission.
 
3)
Space pirate Captain Kristy Ryan grew up the only daughter of a notorious privateer in the Border Planet Region. She learned her trade the hard way – there were no free rides on her father’s ship. Now, she has her own ship, the Unicorn, and successfully works in the shadows, the fringes of legitimate trade. Her life is just how she wants it even on those days when her pilot and lover, Andrew Bennet, drives her crazy.

But an unexpected visit from the Military Space Alliance changes everything. Her father disappeared while working a dangerous mission for the MSA. Now, she’s being blackmailed into finishing his mission.

Comments

  1. Definitely #3 for me. (I love the term privateer, but I'm not positive I know what it is.)

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  2. Thanks, Kristen. Privateer is a fancy way to say pirate. :-)

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  3. Blurb 1 and 3 are currently tied. Anyone else have a vote for which one I should go with?

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  4. The blurb has been picked. Thank you everyone for casting your votes via email, here and on Facebook.

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